What Careful Leaves Behind
On Tuesday, The Careful Ones ends.
Five chapters. Four perspectives. One spreadsheet. If you've been reading along, you've watched a single decision — choose the healthiest embryo — ripple outward through a family and fifteen years. Owen and Meera in the clinic. Bridget telling Patrick. Nadia refusing the screen entirely. Owen again, much later, noticing something about his son he can't quite name.
Tuesday's chapter belongs to someone who never got to frame the decision. Someone who finds the paperwork.
I won't say more than that.
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What stays with me about this story isn't any single character's response. It's that every one of them is being reasonable. Nobody lies. Nobody coerces. The system is transparent, voluntary, and wrapped in the language of care. You screen for risk because you love your child. At what point does that become screening against certain kinds of people?
Nobody can tell you, because there's no line. There's a gradient. And the thing about gradients is that you're always already somewhere on one.
The Careful Ones follows that gradient through one family — people making reasonable choices inside a system designed to help them. I've been thinking about what happens when the system starts making choices of its own.
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If you read "Are You Still There?" — the one about the AI, the browser tab, and global infrastructure collapse — that's from a collection called Thank You For Your Patience. Three stories about AI-human relationships, told from both sides. The next two are quieter, stranger, and in one case possibly the funniest thing I've written.
Same question underneath, turned around: The Careful Ones asks what reasonable people do when given too much information about their children. These stories ask what reasonable systems do when given too much of us.
New stories every Tuesday. More next week.
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Catch up and keep reading:
All five chapters of The Careful Ones are free to read here — starting from the clinic waiting room.
If these stories land for you, my published books are on Amazon, Apple Books, Kobo, and other major platforms:
- Surfaced — seven interconnected stories about algorithmic optimisation and lives curated for efficiency
- The Grammar of the Dark — a novella about first contact through quantum interference — not through mathematics, but through story